Feeling - my poem - sums up how were all feeling

natthecat · Oct 10th, 2008, 04:39 AM

I see the vision, when I sleep
and it's such a sweet dream
but I know that it's not real
and when I wake I could scream

Every day when I wake
it's the first thing in my mind
It's there in my head,
don't have to search too hard to find

It's running through my head
all of the time
and when I see them and their bumps
I really want them to be mine

I dream, of the feeling,
of someone in me, growing inside
thinking of all the thoughts I have
all the Love I'd provide

To feel them moving hear their heart beat
knowing they're part of me
and that every day I would cherish
I'd be as happy as can be

Why is it never me
When will I get my turn
'cos I've been trying so long
and it's more than just a yearn

I'm longing for the day
I hold a young one my arms
keeping warm keeping safe
shielding from harm

Grant me just one wish
Please hear my prayer
Bless my womb with a child
And leave me floating on air.

Mrs R · Oct 10th, 2008, 04:54 AM

Aww hun this is lovely, I esp. like the last verse

Stardancer · Oct 10th, 2008, 14:50 PM

I love it!

maz · Oct 10th, 2008, 16:17 PM

I like it too hun ... it will be your turn soon - as it will be for the rest of us

DaisyDuke · Oct 10th, 2008, 17:29 PM

That is beautiful

vickie83 · Oct 10th, 2008, 18:02 PM

Thats lovely

littlestar · Oct 11th, 2008, 03:13 AM

That's beautiful - thank you for sharing

natthecat · Oct 13th, 2008, 09:56 AM

always written poetry and just thought there were a few recent posts that people thought they were on their own about how they were feeling!

timinolola · Oct 23rd, 2008, 13:28 PM

very nice

wannabemumvc · Jun 16th, 2011, 16:32 PM

i cant believe how much that is how i feel i struggle to put it into words - you made me cry

Oct 10th, 2008, 04:39 AM	#1
natthecat Trying to conceive (TTC) Active BnB Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: West Midlands Posts: 273	Feeling - my poem - sums up how were all feeling I see the vision, when I sleep and it's such a sweet dream but I know that it's not real and when I wake I could scream Every day when I wake it's the first thing in my mind It's there in my head, don't have to search too hard to find It's running through my head all of the time and when I see them and their bumps I really want them to be mine I dream, of the feeling, of someone in me, growing inside thinking of all the thoughts I have all the Love I'd provide To feel them moving hear their heart beat knowing they're part of me and that every day I would cherish I'd be as happy as can be Why is it never me When will I get my turn 'cos I've been trying so long and it's more than just a yearn I'm longing for the day I hold a young one my arms keeping warm keeping safe shielding from harm Grant me just one wish Please hear my prayer Bless my womb with a child And leave me floating on air.

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Mrs R Mum (Mom) Chat Happy BnB Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: N. Ireland Posts: 1,366	Aww hun this is lovely, I esp. like the last verse

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Stardancer Trying to conceive (TTC) Chat Happy BnB Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Teesside, UK. Posts: 1,099	I love it!

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maz Trying to conceive (TTC) BnB Addict Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: In IVF limbo ... Posts: 3,915	I like it too hun ... it will be your turn soon - as it will be for the rest of us

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Oct 10th, 2008, 17:29 PM	#5
DaisyDuke Mum (Mom) BnB Addict Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: U.K Dorset Posts: 8,675	That is beautiful

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vickie83 Mum (Mom) Chat Happy BnB Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: North East Posts: 1,219	Thats lovely

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littlestar Mum (Mom) BnB Addict Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Nottingham, England Posts: 3,255	That's beautiful - thank you for sharing

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Oct 13th, 2008, 09:56 AM	#8
natthecat Trying to conceive (TTC) Active BnB Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: West Midlands Posts: 273	always written poetry and just thought there were a few recent posts that people thought they were on their own about how they were feeling!

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Oct 23rd, 2008, 13:28 PM	#9
timinolola Trying to conceive (TTC) Active BnB Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 12	very nice

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Jun 16th, 2011, 16:32 PM	#10
wannabemumvc Other New BnB member Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 2	i cant believe how much that is how i feel i struggle to put it into words - you made me cry

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