Writing a letter of complaint

Luhweez · Oct 1st, 2008, 14:27 PM

I've never written one before..so im absolutley clueless as to how to compose one, if i didn't get any advice i'd end up just writing a really long rant, printing it and sending it to the hospital! anyone any advice on how to compose one?

**polo_princess** · Oct 1st, 2008, 14:28 PM

It depends who its to and what its about really ...

Elli21 · Oct 1st, 2008, 14:29 PM

Yes...i have written 2 before...But depends on what the complaint is about?
Do you want to PM me or MSN chat with me and ill help you the best i can

mrsholmes · Oct 1st, 2008, 14:29 PM

whats the compliant about? x

Luhweez · Oct 1st, 2008, 14:41 PM

I had a really horrible doctor last night at hospital, i posted a thread about it here to get it off my chest but everytime i think about it i get really upset again =(

A-Hole doctor

alice&bump · Oct 1st, 2008, 15:27 PM

i had to write some when doin a level english language, you can pm me if you want x

helen1234 · Oct 1st, 2008, 16:59 PM

i wrote a letter of complaint to mothercare last week, as i slipped over on spilt water from the cooler and landed in the baskets lol, it did shake me up though, i was with the assistant as well, and she should have wrote it in the accident book even though i werent badly hurt. but i thought theres parents walking around with little babies and toddlers.
i got £15 vouchers and apology.
i basically stated the facts of what happened, how i felt after the incident, and my fears for the future if it were to happen again, keep it clear and to the point.
sorry you had a poo experience
xx

JASMAK · Oct 1st, 2008, 17:08 PM

Wow...well, I would start off by saying the facts of the night, and how his actions made you feel, much like your post. Then I would say things like "hitting is assault and WILL NOT be tolerated for ANY reason". I would then state your wants at this point. My suggestion is a written apology from the DR, and follow-up with whomever you make the complaint to on what they are doing about the situation. I might even go as far as making a mention that you will be speaking to a lawyer if it is not handled to your satisfaction.

Oct 1st, 2008, 14:27 PM	#1
Luhweez Mum (Mom) Inactive Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Northern Ireland Posts: 979	Writing a letter of complaint I've never written one before..so im absolutley clueless as to how to compose one, if i didn't get any advice i'd end up just writing a really long rant, printing it and sending it to the hospital! anyone any advice on how to compose one?

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polo_princess Mum (Mom) BabyandBump Team Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Hertfordshire Posts: 45,510	It depends who its to and what its about really ...

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Elli21 Mum (Mom) BnB Elite Join Date: May 2008 Location: UK Posts: 11,339	Yes...i have written 2 before...But depends on what the complaint is about? Do you want to PM me or MSN chat with me and ill help you the best i can

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mrsholmes Mum (Mom) BnB Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 2,686	whats the compliant about? x

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Oct 1st, 2008, 14:41 PM	#5
Luhweez Mum (Mom) Inactive Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Northern Ireland Posts: 979	I had a really horrible doctor last night at hospital, i posted a thread about it here to get it off my chest but everytime i think about it i get really upset again =( A-Hole doctor

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alice&bump Mum (Mom) BnB Addict Join Date: May 2008 Location: Manchester Posts: 8,702	i had to write some when doin a level english language, you can pm me if you want x

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Oct 1st, 2008, 16:59 PM	#7
helen1234 Trying to conceive (TTC) BnB Addict Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Dudley Posts: 7,833	i wrote a letter of complaint to mothercare last week, as i slipped over on spilt water from the cooler and landed in the baskets lol, it did shake me up though, i was with the assistant as well, and she should have wrote it in the accident book even though i werent badly hurt. but i thought theres parents walking around with little babies and toddlers. i got £15 vouchers and apology. i basically stated the facts of what happened, how i felt after the incident, and my fears for the future if it were to happen again, keep it clear and to the point. sorry you had a poo experience xx

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JASMAK Mum (Mom) BnB Elite Join Date: May 2008 Location: CANADA!!! Posts: 10,943	Wow...well, I would start off by saying the facts of the night, and how his actions made you feel, much like your post. Then I would say things like "hitting is assault and WILL NOT be tolerated for ANY reason". I would then state your wants at this point. My suggestion is a written apology from the DR, and follow-up with whomever you make the complaint to on what they are doing about the situation. I might even go as far as making a mention that you will be speaking to a lawyer if it is not handled to your satisfaction.

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